Wistfane's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dumbledore is Gay]

I love off color humour but even i found it bad

I read the intro I know what was the point behind all this.... but really... it was awfull
No offence but..... here is some practical advice
Graphics: Alright for a comedy i guess, but if you are planing to do something different you should probably improve them

Sound: Sound was satisfactory.... absence of musical or any kind of sound effect besides poorly acted voices is really disappointing

Content: Again I appreciate off color humor and find it funny eating babies or drinking them as juice in the morning... but even i found this in bad taste....
Maybe I missed the point if so, then tell what exactly is supposed to be funny here... because I missed the punchline or vice versa...

All in all i gave it a 3 despite my bias... i just hope next time you'll do better

RSQViper responds:

"I love off color humour but even i found it bad"

Obviously you do not.

So you support the killing of babies, but not the raping of a child?

You need to get your priorities straight, dude.

Hermoine had this shit COMING!

[Rise of Alfred]

Eh?

Dear Emily
must say that you submission needs loads of work. I shall critisize constructively on points of improvement.

Sound: It needs a lot of work. The actual dialogue and music were alright, but the actual quality was poor might wanna get a new mic or try and imrove it with some sowtware like audacity.Its free.

Graphics: I dont know if it was intended but my eyes were grossly offended and they puked. A true visual disaster. The cartoon was badly drawn, in the fact that the shapes and visual efects were crude. Try to imrove it with some shading or brighter colours, a more definitive shape perhaps?

Content: I read the creator's comments and expected a comedy. Puting that aside, taking it as a very strange undefined submission it hard to comment on the purpose and its achievement.
If you just wanted to create a poor cartoon with a lot of shock factor and gross out value you did it.
if you tried to make a meaningful submission with food forthought you failed.
Again im not sure what you wanted to achieve by doing this so its hard to comment.

emily-youcis responds:

GOOD day, wistfane

I have audacity, and the mic was the best i could get at best buy - i think it's just my highly annoying voice that made it sound bad.
As far as graphics, i wanted to contrast the ugliness and drab mundaneness of the real life manager's office with the Glorious brightness of the hallucinated dictator desk. I also wanted to give a deranged sick feeling with the art, as the cartoon is deranged and sick. But i think i drew it pretty nice.
Well this was supposed to be a comedy, Humour is all subjective as i say, and disturbing humor is my favorite, i find it hilarious. I mean there are serious segments in it, but i like that in a comedy.
I thought it had a meaning if you think about it, i wanted to show motive and the groovy pattern of compensation, and the irony that Alfred was so afraid of being alone because of past trauma, yet trauma-instilled-paranoia Caused his aloneness at the end. I'd like people to think about it, and it isn't the clearest of messages, but i still think it is there.